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Tiny Peices

Tiny pieces falling i could say that it means something to me i feel you you walk in my dreams ever-haunting my memories one finger one faint move has got me lingering all my life on you and i could say that i am not impressed and i could waste away with the rest maybe its not that bad brains and blood all down your back i sometimes see those eyes still subsiding in the sky ive given up in my life on trying to leave to leave this behind one last gasp to leave this world always wondering what you could have been worth no institution could change my mind i know the only solution is to take my life to be by your side

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/13/2016 11:05:00 PM
jasmine, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/24/2010 9:42:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jasmine. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 9:48:00 PM
deep write, Enjoying this monday night reading, thank you for the read,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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