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Time's Toll - For Contest

Time’s Toll Bargaining with fate a “now” bartered for a “then” plans made – debts incurred a future becomes a past sliding through tight clenched fingers. John G. Lawless 12/7/2015 submitted to – Time is of the essence – Tanka – Poetry Contest sponsor – C. T.

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Date: 12/29/2015 9:28:00 PM
John,, Congratulations on your "Time is of the essence -Tanka- win... WUV SKAT
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Date: 12/29/2015 5:35:00 PM
Congrats, yours is one of my faves in this contest.
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Date: 12/29/2015 2:28:00 PM
my congrats on your win John:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2015 12:51:00 PM
Excellent Tanka - well written and thought out.
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Date: 12/29/2015 9:21:00 AM
Nice visual of the theme, John. Congrats on your fine win. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 12/29/2015 9:31:00 AM
thank you Sandra for you continued support.
Date: 12/28/2015 11:59:00 PM
Very wonderful John..brilliantly put.. congrats on big win!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/29/2015 9:30:00 AM
thank you Dr. Sharma
Date: 12/28/2015 11:11:00 PM
A Wow! Also, John, congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve
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John Lawless
Date: 12/29/2015 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Eve,
Date: 12/28/2015 9:11:00 PM
WOW
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John Lawless
Date: 12/29/2015 9:29:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to read.
Date: 12/8/2015 2:45:00 PM
well done, John. said very differently from how I did mine, but I think the meaning is basically the same!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/29/2015 9:28:00 AM
the give and take of life's un-ending quest for balance. Thanks for stopping by Andrea, always appreciated
Date: 12/7/2015 8:17:00 PM
I like - concise and dramatic ... CayCay
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John Lawless
Date: 12/7/2015 8:33:00 PM
Thanks CayCay your support is always appreciated.

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