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TIME WISE The early bird got the worm , the not-so-early, precious hours of......sleep! Aug21, 2016 Name of contest Monoku madness

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Lu Loo

Date: 8/23/2016 4:11:00 PM

sooo very cute! congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/23/2016 8:38:00 PM

Thanks, Laura!

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 8/22/2016 9:49:00 AM

haha,I can never be an early bird too!Congrats Sushma!

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/22/2016 11:31:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. With me it is just the reverse. A compulsive early bird , I have always been secretly envious of those enjoying their sleep late into the morning!!This monoku is probably a reflection of that deep seated grudge!!!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2016 9:03:00 PM

haha... I love my sleep, Sushama, Oh perfect monoku, :) Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/21/2016 11:32:00 PM

Thank you,Eve! Laugh and the world laughs with you. Best, Sushma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2016 8:21:00 PM

hahaha. LOVE it. I am NOT an early worm. but I don't get good sleep either.

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/21/2016 8:56:00 PM

Thank you so much,Andrea.I feel pleased to have evoked some laughter.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/21/2016 5:18:00 PM

Hi Sushma, Lol! Good one-liner. Congratulations on your winning write: -)Alexis

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/21/2016 8:58:00 PM

Thank a lot for your kind words.