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Time Will Pass

would you pass me by? when I am lost and alone would you walk away? like I never meant the world time will pass, we don’t have to...

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2010 4:06:00 PM

I really like what you are saying with this one, Wilma. Great tanka! LUv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/26/2010 5:41:00 AM

Great Tanka!!!! and a sure winnner ...love your heart is open wide in this Gem...Loe always Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/25/2010 3:04:00 PM

thank you! glad to know that it was worth losing sleep over? hugs :)

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/25/2010 12:12:00 PM

Time will always pass, but I hope those you lover never pass you by when you need their help, Wilma. Good luck in the pass contest! Diane

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/25/2010 12:10:00 PM

beautiful, if for the contest good luck Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/25/2010 12:00:00 PM

oh I definitely liked your take on the challenge, Wilma! such gripping thoughts you have here-- nikko :)

James Fraser

Date: 9/25/2010 11:48:00 AM

Only a fool and an imbicile would walk past you Wilma >> James :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/25/2010 11:43:00 AM

No, I surely would not pass by you. Your message in this tanka is the same as mine in my entry for the "pass" contest. We're thinking alike again, Wilma. Love, Carolyn