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Time Will Never Age My Love For You

I remember vividly when your strong hands picked me up as you were playing with me as a child. Now they tremble as, I sadly watch you bring the food up with your fork. I remembered when your mind was so sharp, now your slow to remember our names. How you sacrificed working in a foreign land, struggling with a new language supporting your family. Now You struggle with your seizures that overcome you from time to time. You were a sculpturer, a painter, a writer, a champion for human rights. Now you take your medications and take things at a much slower pace, not participating in who you were. Your hair was black, your smile radiated, and your energy flourished. Now your hair has turned gray, your experiences are shown on the lines on your face. I can remember your presentations of your artwork at major universities, and the stories from your homeland, that you shared with impressed college students. How they loved your treasured works. The sculptures you presented to president Reagan, and other famous people you loved. The news articles on you and your prized works. The admiration felt toward you by countless friends and many admirers. Dad one thing time will never age, and that's the love my heart will always have for you... Michael Tor 9/14/2015

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Date: 10/9/2015 2:07:00 AM
You honored your father with a truly beautiful heart
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/18/2015 11:00:00 PM
Thanks Joan.
Date: 9/16/2015 12:22:00 AM
wow, this is a powerful and a wonderful tribute to your dear dad. What a guy he was and IS. I wish I had this kind of relationship with mine! great write.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/16/2015 3:38:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. I feel saddened that your relationship with your dad is not where you want it. He did something right because you are a special human being. I know your mom too had something to do with your kindness and thoughtfulness. What ever the challenges are Andrea I pray you will be triumphant with him. Thanks for your nice comments wish I could help you help so many here. a big hug to you...
Date: 9/15/2015 8:32:00 AM
A moving tribute Michael. Your dad sounds like an amazing gentleman, his is a life worth cherishing. Not many have been blessed with so much.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/15/2015 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Richard, for your thoughtful comments. Yes he was blessed. I am fortunate to have him as my father.
Date: 9/15/2015 7:09:00 AM
Wonderful tribute to your dad. Watching those who are close to you reach the Autumn of their lives hurts sometimes. Thank You for sharing...
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/15/2015 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Edward for your kind words
Date: 9/14/2015 8:07:00 AM
It is so sad seeing a father like this. The same as mine. Cherish the memories.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/14/2015 8:25:00 AM
Time changes all of us. Thank you Tim for your kind remarks. I will cherish the memories. I hope your dad is well.
Date: 9/14/2015 8:02:00 AM
Hi Michael, what a loving tribute to your dad! From this excellent, heartfelt write, I can tell that he is a great man and father! My dad passed many years ago and I thank God that my mother is still alive; but I am sad when I see how life has taken its toll on her. But it helps them tremendously when we continue to shower them with love and respect. A-7! Have a wonderful week ahead, my friend! Pandita
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/14/2015 9:20:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear of your dads passing. I'm glad your there for your mom.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/14/2015 8:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Pandita for your kind and loving words. You always lift me with the kindness that resides in your heart. God bless you. You also have a wonderful week. He is my hero. He always will be.

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