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I lay in the bath, scented candles gently waft tantalising and teasing as the hot water brushes my skin setting it tingling. I stir my legs and hands creating rippling waves that set me afire. I see you approaching through the billowy steam and hold out my arms in welcome. You tease as slowly you strip naked giving an odd tantalising wiggle then lean over and kiss me passionately. You slide into the bath with me water lapping over the edge. Our limbs tangle as our lips meet in hot lingering kisses and we slowly sink under the surface entwined together. Gasping I come up and stare around baffled realising I am on my own, that I had slid under. Slowly, sadly I realise it was only a dream, a beautiful moment suspended in another time. The veils had parted allowing us to love briefly once more until we are, at last reunited by death. written 1/11/2015 contest Hotsy totsy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/11/2015 5:35:00 AM
My eyes became wider as I read through your poem that I found full of suspense. Julia, :)
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Date: 3/11/2015 5:46:00 AM
lol ty thought you might enjoy it Julia hugs
Date: 1/25/2015 12:19:00 AM
I very much enjoyed reading this poem. I felt as if i was peering through the warm steam...very atmospheric! :) john.
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Date: 1/26/2015 3:13:00 AM
ty John so pleased you enjoyed it hugs
Date: 1/20/2015 4:13:00 AM
Wholly Moly, girl... Fifty shades of Shadow!!!.. Very sensual.... Hugs, dear friend.. Arlene
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Date: 1/20/2015 4:42:00 PM
shucks lol ty Arlene hugs
Date: 1/15/2015 10:58:00 PM
gosh, what an intimate look at what could be called a supernatural encounter. It was very romantic like that Ghost movie that starred Demi Moore!!
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Date: 1/16/2015 8:04:00 PM
ty Andrea hugs
Date: 1/15/2015 6:28:00 PM
A touching write, exposing your deepest emotions. It is a brave important write, a fav for me!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/16/2015 8:04:00 PM
ty dear friend hugs
Date: 1/13/2015 10:10:00 PM
I was transfixed by this beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/16/2015 8:03:00 PM
ty ML hugs
Date: 1/12/2015 11:48:00 AM
A twist in the end a jerk. An wow write."beautiful moment suspended in another time" It always happens isn't it Shadow?>>>RAJAT
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Date: 1/16/2015 8:03:00 PM
ty Rajat hugs

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