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Time trekking


A ring imbued with love

Is the gift we both have

Circle and boundless

Unharmed by ages

That may our love

Retain the passion

we have always had

Keep the flame

Burning in our heart

Like the ring’s

Undying gleam

May the golden ring’s

Unscathed gleam

Be an inspiration

To the usual

Fleeting feelings


Let us trek together

In the path of time

Along the way

It may lacerate

Our ephemeral form

But our bond’s strength

Made out of firm

thread of our love

And woven

By our passion and faith

Will remain unstirred

And tie forever in our hearts

As we trudge our way

To eternal lands




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  1. Date: 10/24/2010 6:29:00 AM
    Hi Juan, great write and so emotional! Enjoyed the read this early afternoon! And thank you for your kind comment on "Call of the Cranes". Have a wonderful week ahead! Tc...Gert

  1. Date: 10/22/2010 7:59:00 PM
    An inspiring write that's perfect for anybody getting married :0 wonderful way with words you have here, Juan :) very symbolic! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 11:17:00 AM
    enjoyed reading today! thanks for your comments my friend!

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 12:48:00 AM
    A nice symbolic poem, Juan. I'm very sleepy and I wan to see other poems of yours, but I need to get off here finally. So I'll see you tomorrow, and thank so much for commenting to many of my poems today. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 8:24:00 PM
    hello, JUAN"wow! your spell bounding words are captured perfect in this poem. A little sad with happy spirited emotions to go through. Amazing with them deep thoughts. But, like you said at the end, ( to eternal lands )I really did enjoyed the ending. take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 5:34:00 AM
    Very expressive and gripping write on passion with touchy feelings, Juan