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Time Ticking Terribly

What was snow white is becoming dark red and all forbidden elements, we now touch. Honesty and charity hanging on a thread the society having no positive influence from the church. Why can’t we understand that everyone is everyone’s kindred? It doesn’t matter if you’re African or Dutch. Discipline and perseverance we dread Spirituality and godliness, hated so much. Corruption and hate we eat in one loaf of bread but baked so sweet and soft of such. Our minds, losing their Authority to the robbers of perversion. My weeping spirit scares this ink to stop this out pour from a melting heart. Time ticks, but unfortunately in a terrible direction

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Date: 4/4/2017 3:16:00 AM
It is indeed ticking terribly my brother.May we keep spreading His word in these times of peril.
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Date: 4/3/2017 2:29:00 PM
A realistic poem. Keep the flag flying my 9ja brother.
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Date: 7/10/2015 7:51:00 PM
It's all true. There are those of us who do appreciate what comes from others. We also want to preserve a reasonable resemblance of normal order for generations to come.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 6:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Duke
Date: 7/9/2015 10:56:00 AM
Keep the humanity flowing through your pen. The voice of peace and love is this worlds only hope. I felt the agony of every tick in every line. Peace. :)
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Robert
Date: 7/9/2015 7:21:00 AM
Hi, I liked your time ticking poem. Especially liked how you compared bread to corruption. Some of the white bread sold in stores these days. is nothing but flour, not nutritious or healthy for us. But Jesus is the bread of life and satisfies our souls! Thank you for spreading the gospel. Blessings, Darlene
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 6:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Darlene
Date: 7/8/2015 2:35:00 PM
good write, yes time goes quick and times are getting harder we have peace of mind knowing our final destination we have assurance through Jesus our Lord. we/will be where he is next to God the father in heaven Amen he is coming back for us that's for sure
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 6:49:00 AM
Thank you very much diane

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