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Time Pieces

TIME PIECES grandfather clock time so easy to take apart this child with broken heart couldn’t piece back together that moment she frowned and closed the door i checked my watch second hand stopped gone forever more summer vacation hour hand locked on 3:00 o’clock minute hand but a tick tock away “tick tock” hooray! in my closet out of body out of mind out of time nor even strong wind can rattle the door Dave Austin

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Date: 6/12/2017 4:26:00 PM
Congrats on this featured poem. Nicely written. love phyl
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Date: 3/27/2015 5:23:00 AM
Perfect! For me favs...you my teacher. Love, appreciation and thanks!
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Date: 3/24/2015 8:28:00 AM
Beautifully worded, Daver.
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Date: 3/23/2015 5:13:00 PM
A wonderful chronical of circumstances in Tanka form, awesome to read this diary dear poet ! ;) Have a wonderfully blessed weekend my poetic friend......much love, james
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Date: 3/23/2015 2:53:00 PM
Very nice string of tanka. all with a little different mood, but same theme. =)
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Date: 3/23/2015 1:26:00 PM
I struggle to do one Daver you have created a brilliant string of tanka! Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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