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Time Is Constantly Chasing...

the silver framed reading glasses rest on the nose of a father who’s lost in his novel as he sits up in his now love empty bed he’s living a different life in the journey he’s taking as he absorbs the black and white words that are full of color in his head the tick-tock if his dad’s pocket watch is a reminder that his own time is constantly chasing after him and on the wall a giant’s silhouette is reading over his shoulder that’s created by the single switch bulb that has also grown dim he leans over and pulls down on the string attached to the light and it swings like the pendulum on the grandfather clock in next room as the wrinkles around his eyes help to ease them shut and after a moment his dreams put him back into the journey that he wanted to resume

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/9/2011 3:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Luke. Love Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Luke. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 9:40:00 AM
Congrats Luke on the feature this week. Vince
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Date: 2/21/2011 7:55:00 AM
Brilliant atmosphere to this poem,Luke.A gentle build to a crescendo of age/ageing, Remains with you,makes you think. Regards, Nick.
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Date: 2/21/2011 7:38:00 AM
very nice, deep and descriptive. =) i like it =)
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Date: 4/22/2009 3:58:00 AM
I enjoy your writing so much. These simple descriptions go into such depth. This one touches my heart and thank God for dreams. Going in my favs
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