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Time Is a Magician

Time does magic, for it is not real. Time is all illusion, a sleight-of-hand. We're tricked by it, parceling time into minutes and hours, days and months, years and decades: but they don't exist, no more than a border does when viewed from space. You can prove that, however old you are: think back to a very early memory, like riding a bike or tying your shoes for the first time without help from the grown-ups... be it twenty years or sixty years ago, doesn't it really seem like it was only yesterday?

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Date: 5/19/2018 10:07:00 PM
Love your poem, L.J. Congrats on your win.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/20/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thank you, Line-- as always, much appreciated
Date: 5/16/2018 8:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this thought-provoking poem. Well done.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/17/2018 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Susan, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/16/2018 5:53:00 PM
L. J., I was enchanted by your deep and thought provoking poem. I enjoyed your perspective and the question you posed.. looking back in time is like looking at your reflection in a rippling pond.. only what's important is visualized.. and yes, old memories do seem like only yesterday.. Indeed, 'Time is a magician'! Congratulations on your awesome win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 5/17/2018 9:32:00 AM
Lol! L. J., I’m glad you liked my metaphor. We could both use it in our own way in our own words in a poem sometime. After all, your poem inspired my metaphor. If we use it, we should let each other know so we can read and enjoy it... :))
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/17/2018 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Susan-- I really like your metaphor of memories rippling in water (tempted to steal that for a poem-- just kidding!)
Date: 5/16/2018 10:32:00 AM
Congrats for winning in Brian's contest it is a great poem, thoroughly enjoyable.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/17/2018 8:04:00 AM
Thank you, much appreciated!

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