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Time For Twilight

I see a shimmer of hope with the halcyon sun in the west, the sea breeze gently sways as the mist drizzles on my face- For now, it’s time for the little creatures to have their rest, while the scenery is filled with such delicacy and grace. The sea breeze gently sways as the mist drizzles on my face, the indigo skies above the heavens steal my beating heart- While the scenery is filled with such delicacy and grace, the twilight starts to ascend as the clouds gently part. The indigo skies above the heavens steal my beating heart, as the constellations illuminate with glory and shine- The twilight starts to ascend as the clouds gently part, I know the beauty of nature is from the Great Divine. As the constellations illuminate with glory and shine, I gaze in wonder watching the harvest moon rise- I know the beauty of nature is from the Great Divine, and these reasons for creation have opened my eyes. I gaze in wonder watching the harvest moon rise, a glimpse of the great beyond is so invigorating- And the reasons for creation have opened my eyes, while the eventide settles my soul keeps stimulating. A glimpse of the great beyond is so invigorating, for now, it’s time for the little creatures to have their rest- While the eventide settles my soul keeps stimulating, I see a shimmer of hope with the halcyon sun in the west. September 28, 2016

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Date: 10/17/2016 8:30:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/17/2016 11:37:00 AM
Hi Laura, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 10/1/2016 3:31:00 AM
"I know the beauty of nature is from the Great Divine." - and that's why nature inspires us poets:) beautiful pantoum:)
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Date: 10/13/2016 11:16:00 AM
thank you sweet Jo :)-luloo
Date: 9/28/2016 5:06:00 PM
Very nice twilight pantoum Laura...
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Date: 10/13/2016 11:15:00 AM
thank you Joseph :)-luloo
Date: 9/28/2016 9:43:00 AM
absolutely enchanting LuLoo good luck in the contest - I do adore writing this form:-) :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2016 11:15:00 AM
thank you Jan :)-luloo

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