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Time For Footles

Time passes much too quickly HURRY UP AND GET DRESSED: just wait too late I CAN'T SLEEP: my clock tick tock I DON'T FEEL LIKE DOING ANYTHING: waste time a crime I'M SO BEAUTIFUL: won't last age fast WE'LL BE TOGETHER FOREVER: goodbyes love dies .................................... 3-1-2016 . Footle Contest by:Timothy Hicks

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 7:26:00 PM

LOVE yours!!! Congrats to you on a job well done.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/13/2016 7:57:00 PM

Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2016 4:09:00 PM

very clever string of footles Lin congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 3/13/2016 7:56:00 PM

Thanks, Jan.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/11/2016 2:17:00 AM

Wow Lin brilliant take .. congrats on great win.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/11/2016 3:54:00 AM

I appreciate your congrats, Upma. Thanks.

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/11/2016 1:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Excellent!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/11/2016 3:54:00 AM

Thanks so very much, Susan.

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/10/2016 11:15:00 PM

Wonderfully witty....

Lin Lane
Date: 3/11/2016 3:53:00 AM

Thank you, Probir.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/10/2016 9:22:00 PM

Great job congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Lin Lane
Date: 3/11/2016 3:53:00 AM

Thanks for the congrats and the hugs, Eve ;)

Sam Jameson

Date: 3/10/2016 8:31:00 PM

Nicely written, Lin-- the layout of these is great, squeezed the whole story out of each set. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, very well done!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/10/2016 10:01:00 PM

Thank you, Sam, and congratulations to you as well.

Lu Loo

Date: 3/10/2016 8:03:00 PM

Lovely Lin! Congrats on your placement in the footle contest! Amazing footle :)-luloo *smiles*

Lin Lane
Date: 3/10/2016 10:00:00 PM

Thanks, Luloo.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/10/2016 7:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your high place win, Lin! These were, dare I say, "timeless". I loved how each of your titles were "expectations", while the rhymes were the let downs, when faced with reality.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/10/2016 10:00:00 PM

Thanks, Tim.

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/2/2016 8:50:00 AM

Very good footles!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2016 6:09:00 PM

Thanks, Cas.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2016 3:53:00 PM

great tie in with theme of time. Nice ones!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2016 6:44:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea. I had no idea what I was doing, but it sounded right to me. ;)