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It makes me sad to see, How life can get u down, It breaks my heart when I witness how u change in no time! A Different person each day, a different mentality, with no other way. Why do u change so much? What happens when u are gone? a Change is as good as anything, but a change can lead u the wrong way! Away from me, away from the world! Will u find your way again? Maybe I should change, I might be in the wrong! I came along, singing my own song, doing things, not thinking about the wrong! We all change over time, to come into our own. But time, we don’t have! Life doesn’t go on forever!

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Date: 1/20/2016 9:34:00 PM
JP J, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:28:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you JP. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2011 10:32:00 AM
Very simple yet deep in its meaning. Well done.
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Jp Joubert
Date: 8/24/2011 10:36:00 AM
thank you
Date: 8/24/2011 10:13:00 AM
Thanks for the comments, i appreciate it
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Date: 8/24/2011 9:44:00 AM
a nice poetry from a great mind thanks for sharing
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Jp Joubert
Date: 8/24/2011 10:13:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 8/24/2011 7:48:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry .. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Jp Joubert
Date: 8/24/2011 10:14:00 AM
thank you, i'll post some more tomorrow

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