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Time

as the days drag on time, time passes along we shall stand in a field holding all our strength, all our will snow falls, falls on my face i look up and you are gone, with out a trace i run and run through woods asking where you went but as time passes along i may never know what you really meant our love breaks down after years, even decades my memory of you that was once so vivid, fades i have asked for this day to come where time has made me absolutley numb but as we lay here on the ground we've passed time to meet what we have found as you get up to walk away i must not bother to stay for what we have been has left us not wanting to grin we say our goodbyes for eternity we say our goodbyes to what ever made time you and me.

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Date: 9/8/2009 5:25:00 PM
Hi Autumn unfortunately time does a way of changing things and it is a rude awakening because we realize in our own minds that nothing will ever be the same and there is no return once the deed is done.Thank you for sharing,Dean
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Date: 9/5/2009 4:29:00 PM
One word for this " Beautiful " >>Chowa
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Date: 9/4/2009 7:35:00 AM
I am so happy to be reading your excellent poetry today Autumn. I thank you for sharing it here at the Soup. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2009 3:58:00 PM
Interesting topic time. Sara
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