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Tim Is Taken

There's a young fellow on P-Soup by the name of Tim Ladies love him and wished they could tickle his chin Among other naughty things Much sadness it did bring For Tim is the Daddy of a bunch of wee “hims” © Jack Ellison 2015

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/8/2015 2:06:00 PM

Tim is indeed taken : )So the girls who have softies for him ,better touch one part,and that s only his chin : D.His girl goes by the name of spoilt brat and peach.Heard She has long nails and biting teeth..So beware B-) any other she or her B-).Sweet limerick Jack B-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/8/2015 4:06:00 PM

I see Timothy agrees with you dear Charmaine! He is the male version of you dear lady! Big squeezie hugs and kisses from this old fellow! Love, Jack xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 4/8/2015 2:28:00 PM

: )

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/8/2015 1:10:00 PM

Very cute Jack. You will be happy to know that he has his own way of letting the ladies know his heart is taken..should make you darn proud of him Jack! ~Jan

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/8/2015 1:19:00 PM

He's a symbol to look up to for all daddies and hubbies!!! GREAT GUY! Huggs to you dear Janet!!! xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/8/2015 11:54:00 AM

OH! That's so C.U.T.E... No Dragon you can't have a bunch of wee hims... Why? Cause he might want to keep THEM! Silly Dragon!... Tho when they cry... He might let you baby sit... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/8/2015 12:28:00 PM

Tim is real popular with the ladies!!! Tim the Charmer! xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/8/2015 7:38:00 AM

Lol....thank you my good friend. All their names start with J too...j/ k only half of them.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/8/2015 1:11:00 PM

No you cannot put your kids names here Tim. He's already invaded with Js.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/8/2015 8:19:00 AM

This is getting spooky! Glad you liked it my friend! Cheers, Jack