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Till the Sun Fades

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Tim Smith

Date: 4/11/2016 5:10:00 PM

love it : )

Paul Callus

Date: 11/2/2015 4:42:00 PM

Beautiful! Romantic and somewhat sad. An excellent attempt at an Etheree...waiting for more! // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/23/2015 6:14:00 PM

As your words flow, your after glow glows. :) nice

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/25/2015 11:03:00 AM

Hum!!!! What a fabulous piece..... Your write flows eloquent within my heart.....a lovely and beautiful write..........A.M.

Emile Pinet

Date: 9/25/2015 10:39:00 AM

This is very beautiful and so well penned. You managed to nicely capture the suffrage of young passionate love in this poem, creating the ambiance of the moment well. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2015 5:34:00 PM

wowowow, this is amazing for your first attempt. I'm so glad to see a lot of people trying out this form. It's such a cool form! Loved this one.

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 9/24/2015 5:33:00 PM

I never attempted one of these, but if I do, I hope I can pull it off as well as you

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/24/2015 5:03:00 PM

an excellent etheree,the lines along with the title describes a sensuous emotion.

Darren Hobson

Date: 9/24/2015 4:16:00 PM

nice to see you are still glowing, nice piece.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/24/2015 3:37:00 PM

Beautiful Charma....love the romance only you could bring to this form...a fave....stunning picture too : )