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Thus, Two Are One

We spent the moments partaking in real joy Cuddling, dreaming, fulfilling a ploy Happily sharing closeness Imagining us Two hearts one Thus Attraction Leaving thoughts breathless Dreams flowing free from hopeless Aware of all that we can enjoy We spent the moments partaking in real joy Focus on the heart An Invented Form - Help Me Name It! - Poetry Contest, SPONSOR: Andrea Dietrich

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Skat A

Date: 2/27/2015 10:48:00 PM

Regina, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/24/2015 1:10:00 AM

How sweet is ur write Regina!Lovely read my friend,, where hv u been? Congrats on big win!

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/23/2015 6:59:00 PM

Very sweet and romantic, Regina. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Rob Carmack

Date: 2/23/2015 2:34:00 PM

Congrats Regina.

Abdul Malik

Date: 2/23/2015 11:31:00 AM

Nicely done. Congrats Regina.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/23/2015 8:23:00 AM

This is really good. Congratulations.

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/23/2015 7:48:00 AM

Congrats on your win ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/23/2015 2:17:00 AM

beautifully penned Regina:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2015 12:59:00 AM

A romantic one!! The center word very interesting. it actually worked out ok for not being a noun, which I think serves people better for a focal point. Congrats on your win. I really liked this.