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Below is the poem entitled Thunderstorm which was written by poet Elizabeth Neal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The gods are bowling,
Zeus throws a lightening bolt;
Thus, a thunderstorm.

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  1. Date: 5/19/2009 2:10:00 PM
    When i was growing up my father told me that is was caused the thunderstorms! lol, and i love the mythology you got in here!

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 2:55:00 PM
    fun poetry! Jim

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 4:51:00 AM
    Got me smiling with this one. Nice take on mythology. Enjoyed it. Karen

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 10:02:00 PM
    Dear Elizabeth, YOU have a great sense of humor YOU may want to Edit th first word I am intrigued with YOUR POETRY ALWAYS YOURS... HG

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 8:19:00 PM
    The gods are bowling---- what a great line. good job with this write.

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 4:45:00 PM
    I think it was Rip Van Wnkle who first used the analogy of thunder and bowling, but your great poem certainly adds zest to the concept!

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 2:55:00 PM
    powerful imagery, mythical writing too, nice