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Through Two Lenses

Through two lenses Jump rope or splashes of pool, or fav sack race in my school, Always in a drench, picked out of the trench, These drools made me famous fool. Now seen with paper and pen, running after the same hen, As if grown too wise, I look through aged eyes, Digging deep into the glen. Written Feb 22nd, 2016 For contest "Two lenses" by Sara Entered for "Premiere contest number 11" by SKAT A

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Date: 3/5/2016 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations..pd
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Date: 2/29/2016 3:53:00 PM
Lovely limericks Dr Sharma:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/29/2016 9:19:00 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara..Great choice of grown up hobbies..
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:29:00 AM
Wow! Wonderful write, Dr. Sharma. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/28/2016 7:04:00 AM
Excellent Limerick my dear friend, Dr. Upma! I enjoyed reading it tonight! Thanks for sharing and my warm CONGRATULATIONS on your win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, GL
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Date: 2/27/2016 5:27:00 PM
Great poem, Dr. Upma. I enjoyed reading it, and congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/27/2016 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Excellent. I enjoyed reading.
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:51:00 AM
Good job on this reflective piece, Upma. That's right--we change, but not completely. Janice
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Date: 2/23/2016 5:31:00 PM
Nice one. WE sure do change as we get older, don't we?
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Date: 2/22/2016 4:18:00 PM
G'day Dr. Sharma ... two very enjoyable limericks to read - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 2/22/2016 7:43:00 AM
How contrasting these two limericks are, Upma! One so carefree...the other more serious (but I bet that deep inside a youthful heart still beats...!) Regards // paul
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Date: 2/28/2016 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on et another fine win, Upma:) Regards paul
Date: 2/22/2016 7:40:00 AM
Enjoyable writings that left me with a smile dear, Dr. Upma.
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