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A poem that tells of murder. Imagine you are the killer and tell me about how and why you kill your victim.Any form of 8 or more lines 30 lines max  Title of your poem must be the title of contest no other title is acceptable ie

"Through Their Eyes"

date your poem please

have fun and gl

I was over the 30 line limit, never the less, I tried!

 

 

Of course this is all tongue and cheek; no actual poets were murdered in the making of this poem. I received a few emails, asking to be ”murdered” Although I read the contest, the idea is actually based on a book. Will post the book on my Blog under Good Reads!

 

J Ward was an Australian prison used to house the criminally insane, located in Ararat, Victoria, Australia. There is a story of a man there who cut of his ears, thus the reference in the poem!

 

Through Their Eyes The Poetry Murders Part 3 in the series Murder She Wrote It was a dark night with a full moon The alley narrow, my hopes high My footsteps echoed in the ears of the invisible I quicken my pace I had an eerie feeling, fate waiting At the next gate I rounded the corner Mist from the sewer drifting The ambient mood that of sinister Is that the wind I hear? Before I could gaze up A thousand heavy books Rained down upon me head I was struck dead Surrounded by books and words A hundred yards away Behind the walls of the church graveyard There was laughter in the night Murder she wrote The final perfect one As I lay dead On the street of forgotten poets Through Their Eyes part 2 Sleeping Beauty She gazed into my haunted eyes Knowing my devotion was absolute and complete She fulfilled my nefarious dreams Ever so peaceful in her green eyed slumber She struggled with the rope and tape I whispered in her ear Relax, your destiny is clear You shall sail to the sweetest of places I shall allow you your escape Slowly, smothered with my pillowed love She lies lifeless In peace With my poems upon her chest She has found paradise at last As the light fades from the far away sea Old roads become watery graves North she sails with my words upon her very soul Through Their Eyes part 1 The Poetry Murders She is hiding I know it She knows it She’s next The vast expanse of Ontarian forest Is no protection at all I am the butcher of all slithering poets After all they slaughtered the words Fair is bloodthirsty fair! Everyone suspects the butler Or maybe the Gardner All the usual suspects No one guesses the millionaire Money isn’t everything you know Murder is the thing keeps me on the go Florida was pleasant trip A lot of writers around the lakes A lot of poets down there are really fakes I’ll be serving tacos on sticks Nothing like having strangers eat the evidence The alligators will get the scraps I wrapped them up in such poems of utter crap I so loved the Bible belt They are seekers of redemption and find only fools Now there is a writer with a huge welt The axe you see split his head in three Breathless he sleeps like the holy trinity Rotting away, the same stink was there As In life his rotten disposition Filled ones nostrils the same as deaths kitchen Now I fancy a trip back in time Way way back, way back were I hear roman chimes Caesars second is chasing killers I shall turn the tables of destiny and time Slitting his throat a thousand times Brutus was a pussy cat compared to me! I drinkith the cup of blood, I am thirsty as can be Oh this spree has just begun Killing poets is just so much fun They can hide behind their masks Shivering in silence I stalk their fear Tickling their soulless spines I have a gift wrapped in blood Let me make you divine I pronounce you Silent One till the end of time Headless you sit in your chair Hideous and hiding In death you shall have more class and flair Cyanide is slow and fun You see them shrivel, blank stares Death dancing all over their hairs Your next drink, I do say beware It flows with poetic dreams Taking you away from this earth The sad news is this You will not be going upstairs! Agatha Christie could not spell The fact of the matter some do dwell If she was alive to see me now I’d be facing the garrote for murdering her cow Alas she is gone, dead and buried I smirk; they never caught me for her or the cow Now if you think I am a psychotic nut For murdering poets, hey I was in a rut They all deserved their painful butchered demise Even they have locked me up Not for murder, I was really too good at that They think I am mental and hey lets play along I have one last murder you see, so delicious This crime soon to be I ate my ear to be locked up here Inside of the institute called J Ward

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/4/2016 6:31:00 PM
I like the inventiveness of this one and all those books toppling over. Great write, Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2016 11:39:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I figured if I was to poetically commit murder, only fair they murder me in the end!
Date: 8/2/2016 8:01:00 PM
Hi Arthur, I liked your take and your spin on the contest. One of the best I've seen. I enjoyed the sherlock holmes and columbo feel of the whole piece. If for the contest it should do great. Good luck in the contest A gigantic seven:-) Alexis
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2016 11:38:00 PM
I didn't enter the contest. If I didn't win, my murder list would have gotten all the bigger! :) Hugs!
Date: 8/1/2016 10:21:00 PM
books full of N/A's would be weighty......great write....Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2016 11:37:00 PM
Death becomes us all! Hugs!
Date: 8/1/2016 8:30:00 PM
For me, it would be death by chocolate Arthur. Well done.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2016 11:36:00 PM
Now there is a a woman after me own heart!
Date: 8/1/2016 6:22:00 PM
If you heard wind it wasn't me parping lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2016 11:36:00 PM
Oh I heard not the wind, its the silent winds that get you!
Date: 8/1/2016 4:50:00 PM
Rather you than me. Seriously, I would rather laugh with you than at you.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2016 11:35:00 PM
LOL :)
Date: 8/1/2016 7:30:00 AM
You've been inventing too many crime stories my friend lol - now we know who dunnit lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2016 11:34:00 PM
LOL, I am glad you have the intelligence to see the humor! ha ha ha May the force be with you!
Date: 8/1/2016 4:59:00 AM
Give the man a knife and ya bound ta get victims...loved it for all the bad reasons you wanted me to see...lol...well done and well said
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Date: 7/31/2016 10:13:00 PM
WOW! You see them shrivel, blank stares Death dancing all over their hairs. I loved this...very intriguing!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2016 11:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Sherry.

Book: Shattered Sighs