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Through the Mist

Through the Mist Dawns mists do not deny what they obscure encasing us in cones of all alone create a fear that none - but one - endure the silencing of memories unknown. Cool damp of muted teardrops - never pure obliterate the beauty of the throne as kingdoms of imagination rise on echoes of a misted, rising tide. John G. Lawless Through the Mist, poetry contest 8/19/2014

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Date: 8/31/2014 11:33:00 PM
enjoyed how you mind and heart work to create this visual.. did you mean DAWN'S mist?... lovely, john.. thank you for gracing my contest and congrats!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/1/2014 9:01:00 AM
Nette, I went back and forth on the "dawns mists" vs "dawn's mists". figured it was the plural as in the mists of many dawns or the collective mists of the creeping dawn. Oh, well, sure am glad I renewed my Poetic License. Thanks for your time and effort with these contests.
Date: 8/30/2014 12:42:00 PM
lovely imagery John many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 9/1/2014 9:05:00 AM
Hey Jan, thanks for checking in, always good to hear from you.
Date: 8/20/2014 9:35:00 AM
I love imagery in your write, John
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John Lawless
Date: 9/1/2014 9:03:00 AM
Thanks for checking in
Date: 8/19/2014 4:58:00 PM
Fantastic images! I haven't read the contest listing for this yet, but your poem was great. Best of luck John :)
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John Lawless
Date: 9/1/2014 9:04:00 AM
Thank you Casarah for your good wishes

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