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Through Shadows

On red of night, stars hang low Emitting their flashed luster To witness my hazed glimpses, Cruising through darkened shadows Where I trace my aloneness Down a boulevard now veiled— From the absence of her eyes. Posted by Noel Onat Silhouette Of A Heptagonet, nette onclaud 11. 07. 2014

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Date: 11/21/2014 10:58:00 PM
Feeling the heartbreak in every line read, Noel! Congrats on an amazing win!
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Date: 11/16/2014 4:31:00 PM
Nicely Done, Noel. The final couplet is magnificent.
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Date: 11/16/2014 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Noel
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Date: 11/16/2014 1:54:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 11/16/2014 11:59:00 AM
this is a really good one, both in imagery and final message at the end of it. Love it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/15/2014 4:39:00 PM
painful and beautifully crafted.. your last line drew me in, noel... thanks for joining my contest with my sweet congrats!
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Date: 11/15/2014 7:30:00 AM
beautiful imagery - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/7/2014 3:14:00 AM
fine piece here Noel. thanks for sharing
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