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Through My Window

Sitting on the twelfth floor, how can one see What’s happening down on earth. Children playing merrily? Playgrounds, schools, banks and even distant hills I can see the whole world below. But not my sweet little kid!!! Name - Archana Garg Title - Through My Window Date - 19/01/14

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Date: 2/4/2014 2:52:00 AM
Such breath... Dark Sunshine
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Date: 1/24/2014 9:14:00 PM
It is persuasive to think. I begot mind to read further lines.
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Archana Garg
Date: 2/3/2014 6:20:00 AM
Thanks Deepak, for your visit and comment. :))
Date: 1/21/2014 6:40:00 PM
this is nice, Archana. Yes, to see so much and yet not see what is most important. A good idea to write on.
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Archana Garg
Date: 1/22/2014 2:14:00 AM
To tell you frankly, I live on the ground floor. But I always wonder, how people look for their children when they live on such height. Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea... smiles

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