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Through My Window

I saw light snow drifting through my window Fluffy flakes falling, drifting Invigorating me Cold air blowing its way inside my room I shiver, frigid snowflakes Frozen temperatures Russell Sivey
Contest: THROUGH MY WINDOW Sponsor: nette onclaud 1/17/2013

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Date: 1/23/2014 4:52:00 PM
Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2014 10:10:00 AM
BRRRR..congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 1/23/2014 8:14:00 AM
Beautiful interpretation ands congratulations on the win, Russell
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Date: 1/18/2014 11:59:00 AM
You took me to your white world.....this is lovely, and I felt a chill ! :)
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Date: 1/18/2014 8:57:00 AM
Nice interpretation, Russell
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Date: 1/18/2014 3:47:00 AM
good one for the contest, Russell. Oh my, I need to hurry on this contest!!!
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Date: 1/17/2014 7:33:00 AM
Very descriptive work..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/16/2014 11:41:00 PM
This is how I feel about winter. I love the snow and I embrace the cold. Love the poem!
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