Get Your Premium Membership

Through a Window

I see you through a window It's true you are my love I stand outside as it begins to snow From the heavens that are above We shall lie there for eternity Together in eachothers arms Together is a certainty We're fools for eachothers charms Laughing as we talk Listening to the earth Hand in hand we walk I love you, for what it's worth It kills me to see you walk away You and all your beauty By your side is where I must stay I believe it is my duty Your hair sparkles in the sun Your eyes shine in the moon For now I am done With this eternal tune But gone is where I'll never be Be there is what I must do Yes, that is the job for me To be there with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/20/2010 12:33:00 PM
Many congrats on your wonderful piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
Login to Reply
Date: 1/19/2010 7:38:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, congrats on your well deserved feature. keep writing. Your poetry friend Adeleke
Login to Reply
Date: 1/19/2010 2:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful feature of the week, Cody, and thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2010 12:29:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2010 3:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Cody. I hope you have many more. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2009 2:45:00 PM
Such a charming write..polish this jewel up a wee bit...line 5) lie line 6 & 8) each others..capitalize all the "I's" or none of the "i's". The rhyme is grouped by a series of 4 lines groups with end rhyme on the 2nd & 4th lines. So your form is Rhyme or Quatrain. Please don't be discouraged it's SO good I want it to be FULLY appreciated. Best of Luck in the new Year.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/17/2009 6:51:00 PM
I love the passion in this write! You are a really great poet, and I hope you enjoy it here at the Soup! ~Jen~
Login to Reply
Date: 12/17/2009 12:19:00 PM
That was very nice. Great write. -Courtney-
Login to Reply
Date: 12/17/2009 9:43:00 AM
And I hope that commitment is to poetry too ... for anyone who pledges loyalty so pure is a friend I need, welcome to poetry soup, may always be inspired as you proceed.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs