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Thoughts --Infinitian

some times when on your own thoughts and hurt reigns, hopes pushed to one side. a dark place shows its head do you know why it or how it does? we all have ebbs and downs Penned 11 October 2015

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2015 4:19:00 PM

this is deep Seren - love the link with shadows to the ups and downs in our lives - step out of the shadows and in to the light:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2015 4:28:00 PM

I've struggled with ittoo - to get a good flow with one syllable words and an acrostic is a challenge:-) hugs jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/11/2015 4:23:00 PM

Jan Omg it wasn't easy for me. Thanks to Ian I didn't enter an incorrect one.....Seren.