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Below is the poem entitled THOUGHTS which was written by poet Dawn mclaughlin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I sat with my thoughts
Hands cupped my cheeks
Eyes staring in front
In trance like state
Nothingness insight
Just a blank open space
Imagination would normally
Take place
Nothing but grey mist
Thick like a fog
Waiting too settle
Clear out this negative.

Dawn Mclaughlin.

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  1. Date: 6/6/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Great poem.