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swirling into the never ending,
Why can't i just sleep?

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  1. Date: 10/11/2011 3:42:00 PM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lost. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 12:26:00 AM
    LOL, why indeed! I can so relate to this; it seems that when I want to sleep now, my mind just drifts like the flight of a butterfly. During those times it's when I start to finally fall into a sequential rewind of the day, my thoughts slow and like a falling feather I drift to sleep...Smiles For You :-)

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 12:14:00 AM
    real good question. will sleep on it. thanks~N