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Those Ruby Lips

I want to sensually taste and devour those ruby lips
Mysterious, sultry, desirable and so impenetrable 
Will this be my night of sheer ultimate ecstasy
Or a night lost in a cold frigid non giving heart
Will those lips open and rapturously possess all of me
Or shall they remain closed never within my reach
I so long to be lost in your wild fiery passionate kiss
But shall I be fulfilled or only intolerably tolerated
For years I have gazed at those lips in lustful want
Is this my moment of fulfillment or my Achilles heel?

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  1. Date: 7/25/2012 11:45:00 PM
    Lovely Lizzie - undeniably sensuous!

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 3:29:00 AM
    Nice write Lizzie :)

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 3:02:00 AM
    :)Torment.Its nice write

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 2:51:00 AM
    I love this one Lizzie !!!! Very well written!!! - Have a lovely day in sweet love! - oxox hug from me to you Anne-Lise :)