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This poem is a collaboration between myself and Jimmy Anderson#0459587
Jimmy wrote Those, I wrote Loving and we shared eyes!

T ime seems to stand still when looking deeply into your eyes
H ypnotizing me at will, taking me to paradise
O ceans of deep blue, riding the waves of your irises
S o stuck on you like the most contagious of viruses!
E xcitedly, I'm under your control, staring deeply into your soul
L ost in a whrilpool of your intire being
O nly you my love, my eyes are seeing
V isions of your beauty, sends me floating above
I ntoxicated I swim in your ocean of love
N avagating a journey so your heart will transpire
G iving my all, to fulfill your every desire
E levated I'm flying like a bird, watch me soar
Y our eyes of pure love, I compleatly adore
E scape with me for eternity to paradise
S howing me the way with those loving eyes!

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  1. Date: 5/22/2010 6:08:00 PM
    Fantastic acostic :) JB

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:01:00 PM
    Great write very beautifully penned by you and Jimmy. Amazingly beautiful Poem my friend. And congratulations on your Book with by best wishes. Love and best wishes...Ravindra ....Simone Segal

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 12:47:00 PM
    this is a beautiful poem that you and Kimmy did together.espacially "staring deeoly into your soul" through those loving eyes.(: truly wonderful.the both of you. -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 5:18:00 PM
    Yes, I loved our Acrostic!! Your words were magical..check e-mail for new collaboration..This one's a challengeLOL Hope your like it..I can't received your book if it's sent directly from you..have to come directly from the publishers or book store...hugs, Jimmy

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 4:16:00 PM
    amazing piece!- edward

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 6:42:00 PM
    Hey Simone, I've been so busy!! Great collaboration with Jimmy! I enjoyed this very much! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 4/21/2010 8:05:00 PM
    I say it is a good duo. enjoyed the write from both of you guys. A beauty from the eyes of two..p.d.