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Hush Hush Into the Night

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/28/2015 11:14:00 PM
You wrote a great poem here my friend. A7 -- "Each letter whispered softly like descending mist Mist that covered my lips before they have been kissed."
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Date: 7/4/2015 1:27:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, Charmaine...Fleeting memories lost like tears in the rain. Very lovely indeed! My very best regards! :) john
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:33:00 PM
Awesome write Charmaine! Wonderful pic too!
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Date: 7/1/2015 7:26:00 AM
Date: 6/30/2015 10:18:00 PM
A person who can hush the stars is a special person indeed. This is awesome, in every way. Great write, Charmaine. Great imagery.
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:04:00 PM
Simply beautiful Charmaine! Loved this, I really loved the line "I taste the night so dark ,I taste it's freezing chill"
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Date: 6/30/2015 6:50:00 PM
Hold on tightly to those stars, those memories for they will return to glow again....beautiful Charma. a fav...hugs Tim
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Date: 6/30/2015 6:21:00 PM
Charmaine, your poem is so beautifully written. The road to happiness is certainly filled with curves, twists and sometimes dead ends. A lovely touching expression of how love penetrates our souls. 7
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