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This String of Pearls- a Pd Collaboration

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For PD's Collaboration Contest August 28, 2015 By: Eileen Manassian Thank you for this string of pearls What a beautiful sight! Right? Yes.....a sheer delight. You look surprised! You gifted them to me Can't you see? This beautiful pearl tapestry Exquisite jewelry!!! One by one.... They came to be A word, a look, a gesture.... Each one...an irritant You slipped into the softness of me So....unobtrusively You forgot to set them free As for me? I had to survive Had to stay alive Forged from what pained My nacre tears rained With each silky one I spun and I spun Now...I'm all done! This necklace you see YOU gifted to me ****** ******* ***** The pearl you wear, Can't be compared The inner beauty Your shell gives A surprise you gave Upon my face Blind by beauty upon your grace A jewel not easy to trace Perfect in every way, you trend Hidden deep Beneath the sea Grains of sand lost peacefully Your strength came in a form, While being intruded on So precious, breathless I needed more Layers of nacre touch my greedy hands A pearly tapestry I gave my loved one You shun away, giving shine The Mother of Pearls I rest my case! ~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/27/2015 7:07:00 AM

I missed congratulating you on your win. I enjoyed reading this one again Eileen.

Len Gasun

Date: 9/6/2015 4:33:00 AM

A very precious gem skillfully crafted by my two fave poets and very dear friends! A super duper 7 from me! I'm so glad and honored to read it this afternoon! Many sweet Congrats on your win, my very dear friend, Eileen! Huge hug and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/27/2015 7:06:00 AM

What! I'm not your favorite poet??? I'm crushed... All kidding aside, you have excellent taste, they are both truly gifted poets.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/6/2015 4:37:00 AM

Thank you, Leonora. This is a really sweet post from you. I appreciate it. It was a pleasure to work with PD. I'm glad that we came up with this collaboration. Blessings.

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/4/2015 10:35:00 PM

Two great pearls, one very fine poem. Congrats on this jewel being so uplifting and image ladened.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/3/2015 11:38:00 AM

A beautiful collaboration...a string of pearls, capably formed by the hands of two talented writers! ~ Congratulations for a deserved high-flying win! Hugs // paul

Neva Romaine

Date: 9/3/2015 9:58:00 AM

Hey Eileen, BIG congratulations to you on you win in Linda's amazing contest! This is a beautiful poem and a wonderful collaboration from you both. Well deserved. Be Blessed, Neva

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/3/2015 8:59:00 AM

A joy to read this again and happy to congratulate you on your podium finish in PD's contest, Eileen. hugs!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2015 9:00:00 AM

Thanks, Kim. I'm very please with my placement. I entered the contest rather late, but was happy I got it in last minute. Hugs.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/3/2015 12:33:00 AM

Eileen, this beautiful piece flows really well. Congratulations on your win. You and PD penned a awesome callab::-)Alexis

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2015 9:01:00 AM

Thanks, my dear. :) SO sweet of you to visit this and leave your kind words for PD and me. It is appreciated very much. Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 9/2/2015 11:39:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your wonderful win with the collaboration with Linda Hugs Eve

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2015 9:02:00 AM

Thanks Eve, for your visit to my collab poem with PD, Pearls. You are always welcome here, and I do appreciate your kind words. Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/2/2015 11:00:00 PM

Congrats dear sweet Eileen for a deserved big win with this very beautiful collaboration with Linda!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2015 9:03:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Dr. Umpa. It was a pleasure to work with Linda. She made it so very easy...just following my lead and theme. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2015 10:30:00 PM

Eileen, I just love this one, especially the metaphorical part about the pearls as "irritants." Goes so well with what pearls actually are. Whose idea was that? Yours or PD's? Big congrats on a well deserved win.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2015 9:05:00 AM

Yes...It was in my mind for a time....how painful the process is to get pearls. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, Andrea. Appreciate the visit. Hugs

Skat A

Date: 9/2/2015 5:38:00 PM

Eileen, amazing and flows well.... Congratulations on your win.-----SKAT

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2015 8:59:00 AM

Thanks, Skat. I sure appreciate your visit and post.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2015 2:41:00 PM

simply beautiful Eileen and Linda I am in awe linda of the way you collaborate so freely in so many styles - I LOVE this poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2015 8:58:00 AM

I was actually impressed by the same thing, Jan. I didn't know that she could be so versatile. Thanks for your visit to this work. I appreciate it. Hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2015 2:08:00 PM

Eileen, Congratulations on your awesome win. I'm overwhelmed on the outcome of every poem. Thank you for stopping by my latest blog "MY FELLINGS" and my newest poem "FLESH" I'd like to post the collaboration on my poem list in the near future with your permission. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2015 8:50:00 AM

I am so glad for my placement, PD. A real honor. Thank you. Please!!! I would be honored if you post my poem. Thanks ever so much, dear. Hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2015 2:06:00 PM

Oh, Eileen, first I want to thank you for giving me the chance to work with you. I'd never imagine you'd ever give me the time to collaborate this soon. I'm just saying because it was for a contest. Anyways, I was pleased you did this sorta slam with me. The ending and beauty of the pearl suit you. I felt no matter the strength or beauty one possesses, there's always someone out there's gonna want it or take it for granted. You are strong and beautiful like the Pearl... By the way, I once had a set of pearl earrings. It was amazing, how everyone wanted them badly. So badly, one day they disappeared. :( Anyways, thank you. LINDA

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2015 8:49:00 AM

No need to thank me, PD. I need to thank you for writing with me. I wanted to make sure to join your contest. I've joined your contests in the past and have enjoyed my placements. I'm so sorry that someone wanted your pearls so badly. I'm sorry, Dear. Thanks ever so much for this lovely post. Hugs

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/1/2015 12:27:00 AM

"You slipped into the softness of me So....unobtrusively" love that line!! "Layers of nacre touch my greedy hands " Very intriguing words! I really enjoyed reading this delightful collaboration Eileen and PD! "Exquisite jewelry!!" Indeed, exquisite poetry! ;) Always, Laura

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2015 8:48:00 AM

Thank you dear, I'm glad that you enjoyed this collab with PD. She is a powerful writer, and I'm glad I had this change to write with her. Hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2015 3:45:00 PM

EILEEN, first I want to thank you for giving me the opportunity here. Working with your poem, was great. I have to admit, I was lost, How would I respond to this poem? but after a 3rd read. Everything was a must and flowed the PD way. However, My poem was to match the first ending. THIS outcome gives it a better feel, than the beautiful free verse slam, it was in the beginning. I love the beauty and strength in your verse. Thank you, for giving me that chance... A perfect 7 and fav.... LINDA

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2015 9:31:00 AM

Hi, Linda. Thanks for coming back to this collab. The minor changes. I saw that your contest was going to close so I sent you something really quick. :) You did a great got to follow my line of thought, and I just made a few minor changes to my part. I added the last two lines...and a few other things. It is still a sort of SLAM, as the sarcasm is still there....Thanks for your part. It suits mine well. :) Glad you dropped by....Hugs

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/29/2015 12:19:00 PM

Lovely in every way, Eileen and Linda. Indeed, the beauty of a pearl is forged in pain which makes it even more exquisite. Congrats to you both for a successful collaboration. hugs!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2015 9:28:00 AM

Thanks for your visit to my Collab with PD, Kim. Very kind of you. Yes, pearls come at a cost. I wanted to highlight that. Hope al is well with you. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/28/2015 9:07:00 AM

When two talents come together this is the result. Impressive!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2015 9:09:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. I needs your words of affirmation today. Hugs

Richard D Seal

Date: 8/28/2015 6:22:00 AM

I would say this is a pearler of a poem, drawn from the depths of the oceans imagination by two of my fave poetesses on soup. I wish I could dive this deep and crack open a necklace of words so beautiful. Take care both of you, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2015 8:15:00 AM

What an honor, Richard. Thank you. These pearls were forged in pain...perhaps...diamonds would do? Don't know if PD will pop by, so I will thank you on her behalf. Take care.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/27/2015 11:26:00 PM

Wonderful write girls you both are amazing. Hugs Eve

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2015 8:00:00 AM

Thanks, Eve. This is a lovely post. This is my first collab with PD. It was a good experience. I'm amazed at how she adapts herself to the different writers and different writing styles. Glad you enjoyed it.