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This Poem Is Stupid.. I Was Just Being Creative.. I Used Microsoft Word 7 Words

Imagine, you plus me Picture, things we would see Crop, all the bad things around Edit, all the bad sounds Paste, put two and two together Cut, all the bad weather Simplify, what life means to you Redo, a past you once knew Shape, a future into something you need Insert, the words you plus me Learn, our hearts as one Finalize, what needs to be done Review, the life that you once knew Complete, you hear with the feelings that speak true Finalize, Spell check all of your errors Remember to remove all your fears When your complete, and ready to be checked Remember it was me, that you could always connect

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/23/2010 4:48:00 AM
One; Never, never call your work 'stupid' You can say it is silly, or, something you're having fun with, but to say it is stupid, strikes me as being self-derogotory. There's plenty of people in the world that wouldn't mind to do that job, without you even having to ask. For two; "Complete, you hear with the feelings that speak true" Maybe re-work it slightly to be a word/two shorter? All-in-all, I like this! Excellent imagination, and good basic writing skills:)Please, continue your writing
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