This Poem Is a Monorhyme

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This was a lot of fun. I hope you like the ending

This poem is a Monorhyme By Franklin Price 12/8/2016 This poem is a monorhyme About a mountain I should climb Just to the east of Anaheim Must climb it while I'm in my prime Must get a permit just in time If not the climb would be a crime The permit cost is just a dime The cashier is a white-faced mime To get his attention ring the chime The broken silence not sublime If you want can pantomime Must wash your hands of any grime Don't damage them by using lime For melted skin turns into slime Could bandage it with sprigs of thyme Others might not yet be done but I'm

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Chris Green

Date: 12/9/2016 7:20:00 AM

This was very cool Franklin and I'm sure not easy to do, though you made it look like it was.

Franklin Price
Date: 12/9/2016 8:21:00 AM

It was a lot of fun Chris. Thanks for visiting.

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/9/2016 12:36:00 AM

Ha! Franklin, this is great. : ) And you know - using caustic stuff like lime really does result in sliminess. : (

Franklin Price
Date: 12/9/2016 8:24:00 AM

Doug, thanks for visiting, and I did know lime will cause slime. I wasn't just attempting to rhyme this time....r u lol ?