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This Nice March Day

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~This Nice March Day~ (Etheree) The Sun peeps Its warm orb It rises high Caresses my face This nice spring March hot day Take slow walk around garden Relax get some peace enjoy day Pigeons black birds take flight soar sky blue Twinkle licks and licks paws softly I laugh Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 March.07.2015 Authors footnote: *Twinkle* my white beautiful female cat partly Siamese. I have two, the other one is black and I named her "Shadow" :) lol In God I trust!

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/14/2015 10:28:00 AM

Your message is vivid, clear and conspicuously imaginative. Good work and definitely a 7

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/19/2015 4:44:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Funom, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In His light! God bless you!:) D.

Julia Ward

Date: 3/27/2015 5:56:00 AM

A sensuous poem in an interesting technical form. Julia, xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/27/2015 7:18:00 AM

Thank you so kindly,Julia, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In His light! God bless you! :-) D.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2015 3:51:00 AM

- Spring is a beautiful time - It's a little early, too cold to enjoy yet - But it comes, little by little - A lovely spring poems, which I enjoy reading dear Dorian - I wish you a lovely day - <3 and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/13/2015 9:14:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Anne Lise , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciate it. Yes, spring is so beautiful in every way.You're very kind my very dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Hugs! xxx D.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/10/2015 11:42:00 AM

H Dorian, this is a lovely image of a warm spring day in the garden. I enjoyed the read...hugs, Rhonda

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/10/2015 4:37:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Rhonda , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :-) D.

Anna Hopper

Date: 3/9/2015 7:27:00 AM

Love it! Spring is the best season! Beautifully written!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/10/2015 4:36:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Anna , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :-) D.

Matt Forshay

Date: 3/8/2015 1:37:00 PM

This is a great piece, with beautiful imagery that really makes me crave Spring even more. After the Winter we have had here in Boston.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/8/2015 10:44:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Matt , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/8/2015 10:44:00 AM

So nice to read your work this sunny New England morning. [my cat is a stray who is part siamese his name is Smokey because he is gray!] Light & Love

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/8/2015 10:44:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Debbie , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) Hugs! xxx D.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 3:48:00 PM

What delightful Spring imagery:-) Hugs jan xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/7/2015 4:30:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Jan, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! Wishing a very lovely evening!In His light! God bless you! :) D.