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This Love Won'T Die If We Give It One More Try

If we open up and talk Both of us will stay--not walk Out of this relationship That has tumbled and done flips Back and forth from good to bad Where's the love we used to have Somehow it just disappeared Leaving both of our hearts scared That it will soon fade to dark We need to turn back the clock Finding our way to the place Where there was always a trace Of happiness, joy and care Surrounding us everywhere Every minute of the day When did it just start to stray Leaving us to find out why This strong love started to die Slowly erasing the romance We need to search for evidence There is something we have missed Before we finally dismiss And damage the little bit Of flame that is small but lit Wanting to grow big and high If we give it one more try So we don't lose what was given In our lives--we can start livin' Once again in harmony If our hearts just look and see Remembering the happy times To lose this love would be a crime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/1/2014 7:12:00 AM
Another touching writing on love. You are writer who can convey the emotions through the poem and make people feel them good work
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Date: 1/29/2014 9:16:00 PM
I think this is a poem that speaks to nearly everybody's relationship. True words!!
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Date: 1/29/2014 9:15:00 PM
Robin, I just saw one of your "vids"? I am not sure. Does it mean that you took your favorite scenes and put them together with the songs? it seemed professional as if the tv show had maybe done it. You know how Glee sometimes does montages of characters paying tribute to them with a song? So do you make up your own? That is very interesting!! also, you have to be like me married all these years -- not that young anymore!! How cool to find someone here who also is not too old for Glee!
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