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Below is the poem entitled THIS IS OUR YEAR which was written by poet Lizzie Treetop. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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World out there please take note
After all the struggle, doubts and fear
This is my moment, this is our year
In fact this is my future this is my life
Dreaming, dreaming always dreaming
No more, no more, reality is here
And I am soaring to the stars
Climbing mountains like a rocket I’m off
No more alone, no more loneliness
No more crying out searching for a friend
He is here and I am truly blessed
I dance and I sing and my heart is full
My creativity is soaring ever upwards
My music blessed with a young man
Working together in unison my melodies sing
World watch out we are now quite invincible
Rejection is not in my dictionary I’m on my way
With all this strength I know we cannot lose
Oh yes watch out world, we will set you on flame! 

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  1. Date: 7/2/2012 3:00:00 AM
    Great positive write well done!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:56:00 AM
    And oh, how it makes me shout with joy with you as you partake of this adventure, this slice of life no one should are able to share with us! Rockets going off for you !*! Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 4:22:00 PM
    Lizzie, I like the way you take charge.. I wish, i could say this was my year, but it is not... I love your ending, lol.. to who ever tries to stand in your way... I love your confidence. by the feel of your poem..I know every word you are saying here is speaking with determination... enjoyed,..pd

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 10:02:00 AM
    Lizzie, go get em' girl...David

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 1:41:00 AM
    So beautiful written Lizzie, and you are so in love it shines in your poem.Happy for you and wish you all the best in life and love!No more crying just smiling. - oxox big warm hug to you Lizzie - always/Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 6:57:00 PM
    Excellent poem. I loved it. Keep reaching towards your dreams and keep letting your creativity flourish and let nobody stop you from achieving your goals and dreams in life.