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This Gorgeous Butterfly

There once was a fellow named Bert Who had always been considered a jerk Till one day he passed by With this gorgeous butterfly Couldn't miss Bert's dirty big smirk © Jack Ellison 2015

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 4/26/2015 10:34:00 PM

Nice work on bert the jerk. Perhaps he's one of those that hasn't told anyone he's a poet. -J.T.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/27/2015 6:39:00 AM

Thank you J.T.! I appreciate your humorous comments! Jack

Funom Makama

Date: 4/26/2015 11:15:00 AM

Sound poetry like a mid night song scrubbing the mind to peace and comfort. I love everything about this page and a 7 definitely.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/26/2015 11:16:00 AM

You are much too kind, my friend! Thank you... Jack!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/25/2015 11:01:00 PM

Bert the jerk! Nice little one. : D Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/26/2015 6:20:00 AM

Love and hugs, Jake The Snake!!! xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/25/2015 12:49:00 PM

???... Can't win them all...

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/25/2015 1:58:00 PM

Ha! Bert sure showed them! LOL xxx