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This Fray

Looking back past this blink in time.... Finding his innocent child; had we known How to save a life I lost a friend, somewhere Along the way amid life's bitterness silently gazing Purity's eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/4/2014 6:31:00 AM
Very sensitive, insightful verse you have written, here Jeremy. I think I sent you a reply earlier thinking you were someone else who goes under many names. After reading your poetry, I think I was incorrect. This verse is awesome. bfn Lainie
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Date: 6/3/2014 2:21:00 PM
sensitively written and rich in meaning in its brief form... well done, jeremy!.. huggs
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