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This angel

This angel spreads her wings and beats them one last time.
She flies through the sky, caressing soft clouds and catching breaths of cold air.
The snowflakes surround her, sparkling her wings, and weaving a crown around her head.
Her blond hair flows at the rhythmic whispers in the air, 
and her blue eyes twinkle, reflecting off the ocean just below her. 
This angel is a guardian of a dreams, a mystical being, isolated from the rest of the world. 
Do you know this angel? Because she knows you.

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  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:04:00 AM
    Hi Rachel. Thiis is a beautiful poem with wonderful imagery. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I'm enjoying your work. I hope you don't mind if I make one suggestion. Try to pick a form for your poetry. Even if your not sure. Any poem with a rhyme scheme, you could call rhyme. Any poem without rhyme or meter (like this one) you could call free verse. I make this suggestion to you because you will probably get more poets to read your work if you don't lead with I don't know. Your poetry should be seen! :))

    Peysakhova Avatar Rachel Peysakhova
    Date: 9/14/2012 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aw thank you! I will definitely try, i just didn't really want to say the wrong thing, haha :) Thank you for the compliment and advice! <3