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this aint the life

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this aint the life

this aint the life i dreamed of
but its the cards of life i was dealt
i try to be a good wife
no one really cares or asks how i felt

i always feel so lonely
and i feel like no one cares
i try to be a good person
but sometimes im not always there

i feel just like a loser
wish sometimes i could 
just disappear from earth
im sure no one would even miss me
especially the 3 to whom i gave birth

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  1. Date: 1/27/2011 12:43:00 PM
    Sad thoughts of disappointment , be patient time is the great healer, debbie

  1. Date: 1/26/2011 11:11:00 PM
    They will miss u more than u realize.....selfishness iis in the air but u all r a mojor part of echother i suggest a family moment,heart 2 heart and eye to eye.........................I liked ya poem it was real.....