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This IS Eden

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This IS Eden

Your nakedness in the morning light, 
Surrounds the JOY I received last night. 

Together we watched the glow of the Moon, 
Knowing this moment would end to soon. 

Sinful Shadows of my Lustful greed,
YOUR Forever Love: what I want and need. 

The sweet fragrance of Your Innocence, 
Waifs through the grieving of forgotten sense. 

Forever and Always, through all these years : 
Our tale of Love, and sex, and all its Fears.


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  1. Date: 8/16/2010 5:17:00 PM
    very sweet dedication for yours :) nice write, keep sharing and stay blessed!

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 4:21:00 AM
    I like the poem. The expression of love. seem to have man to loose his place in the garden. The priceof love has been trouble and hardship.

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 1:31:00 PM
    Terrific HG, a joy to read. Many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 8:15:00 PM
    Well, my Adam..our tale is out there for all to sinful, lustful Adam you.. Im proud of you..lets see how your Eve does..BG

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 5:23:00 PM
    Congrats on the win

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 4:47:00 PM
    Congrats HG my silent beau on your success in my ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write.. with luv from your forever "Sweetheart"..hope u are feeling much better today... luv..

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 8:16:00 PM
    Perfect! do not touch anything... its great.. my silent beau... SOUP MAIL... with luv from your forever "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 6:17:00 PM
    ahhhhh if we only we NOt taught "lovemaking" was sin?....did you want to check line 7 help you win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 12:02:00 AM
    the fourth stanza is beautiful. and everything in this write of your is passionate a pure and sweet essence. outstanding and heartfelt love writes from you as always. i love you always spirit brother.& good luck as well.(: -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 4:19:00 AM
    enjoyed the read, nice entry with your poem, the best of luck,..p..d

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 3:49:00 AM
    Wish you all the best in the contest. I like the first passionate couplet