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Thirteen Syllables Or Less

Thirteen Syllables Or Less Contest Sponsor: Timothy Hicks blue jay chirps tunes of Spring with colored harmony ~12 Syllables~ ~Date Written: March 30, 2016~

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 4/4/2016 11:36:00 AM

Laura's laurel.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/3/2016 8:26:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Laura. We see them in our front dogwood tree with their striking 'colored harmony'. Congrats on your placement. Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo
Date: 4/3/2016 12:29:00 PM

Thank you Sandra :)-luloo

Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2016 4:43:00 PM

The image you presented is delightful, Laura! Congrats on your placement in this contest. ~ Regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 4/3/2016 12:29:00 PM

Thank you Paul..:)-luloo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 2:26:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Laura..

Lu Loo
Date: 4/3/2016 12:28:00 PM

thank you...:)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2016 8:51:00 PM

hey, I see it won!! Congratulations, sweetie. And sorry again about Milo.

Lu Loo
Date: 4/3/2016 12:27:00 PM

thank you Andrea. :)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/31/2016 4:03:00 AM

Back to give you congratulations luloo on your placement. I loved colored harmony too! ; )

Lu Loo
Date: 3/31/2016 10:42:00 AM

Thanks again Connie :)-luloo

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/31/2016 3:33:00 AM

Congrats Laura! Very beautiful marriage of color and sound. I just couldn't pass up "colored harmony" << a golden line, and a great capture of the blue jay.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/31/2016 10:41:00 AM

Thank you :)-luloo