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Thick Comes the Night

The darkness subterraneously slowly slides in As it covers the woeful wounds on the sanguineous skin Thick comes the night I know it very well Where mendacious mourners induce their own hell The tears that fall...and build a wall of silence With slippery slopes...and abandoned hopes of guidance For the pouring of tears...of yester years behind us As we slip and fall...and hit the wall that binds us They cascade with their own charade...from within the inner soul I slipped and fell to my own hell...on a tear drop as black as coal. June.22.2016 For Contest... I SLIPPED ON A TEARDROP AND LANDED . . . By Cindi Rockwell

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Date: 8/14/2016 11:15:00 AM
'Slipping and falling to one's own hell' and the 'cascades of charades', these are strong pictures. Been there, done that, got the T-shirt. This poem is very powerful.
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Date: 6/23/2016 7:46:00 PM
this is wonderful,^WW^, great flow good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 6/24/2016 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/22/2016 7:48:00 PM
The pouring of tears of yesteryears... i Love it and can relate. Excellent write my friend.
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Date: 6/22/2016 11:18:00 PM
Thank you Daniel...hope all is well in your kingdom...god bless...WW^
Date: 6/22/2016 12:38:00 PM
Very well done WW...I liked the internal rhyme and alliteration you used. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/22/2016 4:13:00 PM
Thank you my friend Tim...god bless...^WW^

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