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They can't take you

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Below is the poem entitled They can't take you which was written by poet Brittany Andrews. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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They can't take you

I cry at night wish to have you by my side..
I cry all the time hoping to have you back for myself..

I feel like we can't be together.
I feel like they are taking you away from me..
I feel like i never had you in my arms... or my heart..
I feel like you don't exist anymore..

They can't take you!
They can't take you away from me..

Or can they??


( thank you for reading :) may you please comment on what you think :) if you comment on any of my poems ill read and comment and rate yours :) hehe a lil bit of bribery )

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  1. Date: 10/30/2011 1:01:00 PM
    interesting...mixed emotions in this poem...nice diction..nice settings..this is a well defined poem

    Andrews Avatar Brittany Andrews
    Date: 10/31/2011 10:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2011 3:11:00 PM
    * “That Sounds Like A Lovely Deal I Could Not Allow to Pass My Dear Beautiful Brittany * Now This Truly Does Remind Myself of Some Love Story Such As Romeo & Juliet * Yet Rest Assured That Whatever Is Meant to Be Shall Be So, Let Your Beauties Heart Never Be Troubled * Keep Brushing * Luv * Sarah.” *

    Andrews Avatar Brittany Andrews
    Date: 10/31/2011 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much :) that means alot to me :)