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They Called Him Juan

His name’s John, but they call him Juan. Got gamblin’ in his veins. Loves poker without the joker, An’ plays cards when it rains. It wet us all one day last Fall, An' they came together. She's dealin' draw, her charms he saw, He loved rainy weather. He said,” Honey, play for money, I aim to do two things. Take yor’ pot then all that you've got Afore the rooster sings.” She said,” Young hoss, count up your loss After you’ve played awhile. Once yor losin', stop abusin'– See if you wear a smile.” She had a chest under that vest, Had two buttons open. Eyes was roamin', beer was foamin', Lookin’ there an’ hopin’. He was peelin', she was dealin’ From bottom, top and middle. Took his dues and IOU’s - Didn’t leave a little He arose as the rooster crows, An’ gazed at all she had. Kissed her lips and patted her hips “One out of two ain’t bad.” July 27,2916 For Contest Pink Domino

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Date: 7/30/2016 8:48:00 AM
Your wonderful work got my attention! I am so glad to place it in the winners’ list..Congrats to you. Sara
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/2/2016 8:48:00 PM
Thank you,Sara...fun contest and I appreciate the kind words...Larry
Date: 7/30/2016 12:46:00 AM
Enjoyed the read, funny stuff! A good game of poker and great company, always entertaining.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/2/2016 8:49:00 PM
Thanks, Jesse! Always entertaining indeed !!..Larry
Date: 7/29/2016 4:01:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Larry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/29/2016 9:08:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!!!..Larry
Date: 7/27/2016 3:14:00 PM
great humour Larry good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/27/2016 6:15:00 PM
You made my day, Jan!! Thank you!...Larry

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