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These things I want to tell you

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These things I want to tell you

These things I want to tell you.

It’s a lovely morning
It’s soft and warm outside
The crescent moon it rides the skies
It all seems deified
As dark clouds fill the velvet sky
I write this song for you
For when they come these wondrous morns
Well this is what I do.

First of all I’ll tell you this
That you’re my special girl
You’re my Rose of untold beauty
You be the rarest pearl
And I want to let you know
I could never love another
You’re soft, and sweet, and wonderful
You be the perfect lover.

I hope that when you read these words
You’ll know that I’m sincere
The one thing that I love so much
Is you are always here
To cherish me and love me deeply
I could not ask for more
You’re my lovely Vera Rose
The girl that I adore.

31 October 2013 @ 0556hrs.

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  1. Date: 11/1/2013 3:46:00 PM
    A beautiful, beautiful poem, Peter! This poem was easy to read and I enjoyed it very much. Just lovely!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 11/1/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kelly for all your nice comments...Peter
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Beautiful!! These words are a blessing to read, true meaning & testament of love,,,tyfs <3 Cherie

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 10/31/2013 4:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Cherie...peter
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 7:48:00 AM
    Love this cuz, beautiful words for a beautiful lady x

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 10/31/2013 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my favourite Cousin. I appreciate you visiting my page...Peter
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 3:27:00 AM
    Beautiful!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 10/31/2013 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so very much Bindu...peter
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 9:51:00 PM
    This seems to be a contemporary ballade. I enjoyed the use of metaphors and similes, Peter

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 10/31/2013 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much doc, your comments are sincerely appreciated...peter
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 8:08:00 PM
    Such a delightful read, all full with metaphor after metaphor! Such a lovely poem and I can relate my friend! Thank you for this poem, opens my eyes! Great write my dear friend Peter.... Chris!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 10/31/2013 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Chris, so nice of you to visit my page...Peter
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 7:37:00 PM
    Delightful... tender... wonderful... Terry

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 10/31/2013 4:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so very much Terry...peter
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 7:23:00 PM
    awww! this is so tender and touching - a beautiful tribute to your lady!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 10/31/2013 4:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ilene, your kind words are deeply appreciated...peter