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These Four Walls

my four walls are invisible, they cannot be seen but they are thick, wide and deep after all these years each board, each nail, a sorrow, a tear, a grief I hide myself within these self-made high walls secluded, concealed, my secret refuge from the world I am safe within my box, I cannot be hurt in my fortress . . . my box, my fortress has no ceiling and I can see the azure sky the falling rain washes over me, the wind speaks to me, softly snow, I gather like a pure white blanket and my mind takes me to wonderful places, far off lands and my fantasies are breathless and beautiful and I write poetry, pages and pages, fluttering away oh my box is a special place where tranquility dwells . . . but sometimes, oh dark the journey, I visit death down winding roads and I am a beautiful girl floating wispy my long raven hair flowing like a cloud around me and I stand before tombs, tombs and tombs and those beneath the cold earth come to me weeping we kiss until the light of dawn takes me away back to my four walls, my box, my fortress with no ceiling . . . and when I must venture into the real world, I wear a mask a mask of happiness, I can never let anyone see the pain within, it would shatter their hearts forever oh my soul and heart are broken for all infinity, this is written there has been too much death, too much sorrow, just too much you have no idea, dear reader, you can even fathom it . . . _______________________ February 19, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/these four walls Copyright Protected, ID 16-759-533-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Four Walls Sponsor, C.T. Second Place ___________________________________ Submitted to the contest, Second Place Contest sponsor, Laura Loo Seventh Place

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Date: 6/27/2016 10:57:00 AM
Very deep pain of life expressed with tremendous beauty. My favorite one. A 7 sure. Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/27/2016 10:16:00 AM
Broken Wings, a beautiful poem here you have a true gift lovely lady, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/12/2016 1:34:00 PM
Congrats Broken Wings. Happy that you placed high. Bless U. Curtis
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Constance La France
Date: 3/12/2016 4:52:00 PM
Curtis, thanks for visiting with the congrats and the support, appreciate ~
Date: 3/12/2016 9:41:00 AM
Great write, Broken Wings!! It's good to know that your four wall box, has an open ceiling through which your poetic light shines!! Congratulations on your placement!!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/12/2016 11:45:00 AM
Sarita, thanks for visiting with the nice comment and the congratulations !
Date: 3/11/2016 6:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win. brilliant imagination letting me see...
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 6:49:00 PM
Iris, thanks for visiting my poem with congrats and the brilliant ~
Date: 3/11/2016 4:14:00 PM
Congrats to you Constance. I particularly liked; "each board, each nail, a sorrow, a tear, a grief".
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 6:54:00 PM
Rob, thanks for the congrats, I like that line also !
Date: 3/11/2016 1:46:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, Congratulation on your win. Excellent poem--very moving with powerful imagery. Cheers, Brian
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 7:13:00 PM
Brian, thanks for visiting with the congratulations, the excellent and the compliment !
Date: 3/11/2016 11:37:00 AM
We often tend to box ourselves into our own world of grief, when it is too much to bear. We all suffer sooner or later with our own 4 walls, dear Broken Wings, but we must carve our own windows to let in the sun as best we can. Such a sad, but wonderful poem, Constance! Congratulations to you once again. :) hugs!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 7:17:00 PM
Carrie, thanks for visiting with the congratulations, the wonderful and the nice comment and of course the hugs !
Date: 3/11/2016 11:21:00 AM
Congrats on contest oh dark one...^WW^
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 7:24:00 PM
Winged, thanks for the congrats !
Date: 3/11/2016 10:19:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your "4 walls" win.... Love LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 7:41:00 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the congratulations !
Date: 3/11/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thank you
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 7:42:00 PM
CT, thank you for a great contest and for my wonderful placement, I am honored !
Date: 2/26/2016 4:29:00 PM
My friend. May you place well in this contest. Well written and easy to follow. It was as if I saw you in the market place with your pain and sorrow tucked away beyond the view of any and all. But I also see "Another", unseen also by any and all, looking in on the pain and sorrow. He is being deeply touched by all that's within, unseen, and unknown by others. God bless. Curtis.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/27/2016 7:55:00 AM
Curtis, thanks so much for visiting with that wonderful comment, you see the picture I paint with my words so clearly . . .
Date: 2/21/2016 2:49:00 AM
Top-notch entry, Constance. You are so creative!!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2016 2:55:00 PM
Elaine, thanks for visiting and the compliments, so appreciated !
Date: 2/20/2016 5:41:00 AM
Excellent! I think this is extremely clever and witty - love it ... CayCay
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Constance La France
Date: 2/20/2016 12:59:00 PM
CayCay, your so funny, thanks for the excellent and the clever and witty and the love, but, its not done yet !!!

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