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These Buttons-- Sad

These buttons up and down your chest, so close to you they felt your breath all day as you hurried for work; rounded studs so near me , I ache holding them now that you are gone. I never gave the pearly shells much attention through the long nights, except to stitch them extra well to save myself hours if they fell. I ironed all around them, washed this shirt for long deadlines unsought and wept for precious moments lost. These buttons up and down your chest, undone while we loved through moonlight; I rub them now for your funeral… and find their clasp,miserable. ---------- 7/23/2015 Silent One's Moods Contest Write Me Sad

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Date: 8/2/2015 11:18:00 PM
Deep emotive write nette that's worthy of a great win! Big congrats!
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Date: 8/2/2015 4:25:00 PM
Deep, poem Nette, Congratulations SKAT
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Date: 8/2/2015 7:55:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 3:38:00 PM
Thanks for sharing, Nette! Really enjoyed it. Good luck in contest.
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:53:00 AM
Deeply touching, sad, a lovely relection on those insignificant things that suddenly mean so much. Beautifully penned, nette. And a #7. Viv x
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:20:00 AM
Thank you Nette for your always welcome comments on my poetic endeavours.have a good day.rgds Brian
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:12:00 AM
Touching heart and beautifully crafted poem. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:41:00 AM
A lovely write Nette, this is indeed a great write, excellent............A.M.
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Date: 7/22/2015 11:14:00 PM
A lovely moving entry for the contest Casandra. It is sure to place well. hugs, Connie
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Date: 7/22/2015 11:15:00 PM
I keep doing that....I knew I was writing you Nette, but my eyes just went on automatic and my fingers typed in Cas. Sorry! LOL
Date: 7/22/2015 3:47:00 PM
My goodness, weaving in buttons to work your way through a theme on death and mourning is for me, a huge creative achievement.I rate this superb poem highly!
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Date: 7/22/2015 3:43:00 PM
Wow, such sadness, wrapped in such beauty is indeed terribly bittersweet with memory. You are very gifted !
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Date: 7/22/2015 3:40:00 PM
Though the tone of this brilliant poem is soft, it provides a strong impact filled with grief. Very hard to duplicate your style!
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Date: 7/22/2015 3:36:00 PM
oh Nette such sad imagery in this tender write:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2015 3:32:00 PM
A beautiful solemn write. Something, so ordinary, we take it for granted, takes on a new significance when we see it for the last time.
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Date: 7/22/2015 2:45:00 PM
- Touching beautiful from your heart pounding chest, dear Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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